Freewrite

The next President ….

Election day is November 4, 2008, I think we need a president who is intelligent…. In my opinion I want Barrack Obama to be our next president… If I were old enough to vote it will be Obama all the way … The reason I will vote for Obama is I want someone who is well-spoken to be President, someone who can act as a statesman. Obama Is a great speaker he speaks clearly and intelligently to the foreign leaders. After having George Bush we need someone better someone who steps into the world stage like Obama did in Berlin and he is showing people that things are changing in the United States. So I want some one to represent my country as an intelligent leader not a crude and unworldly person who does dumb things in public… I also want some one who inspires people to be president Obama is beloved because he speaks to peoples hearts… He talks about our deepest values and asks us to be better people…. I like that he speaks to young people and to all races… So I really hope people choose the right person to become our next president….. I believe Obama will give us hope and thet haqnge that our country really needs so we need all to those elgible people to vote who they think will be the best next leader for our country.......

Developing Your Character

Characters name: Jane

Age: 17

Occupation: High school student

I saw a young girl walking with one of her friends and she looked like she was
17 and she was in high school she wad wearing her uniform.

Shes 17 she attends Brody Valley High school. She is tall she
is a brunette she has dimples and has freckles and she is the sweetest girl you
will meet. so she wakes up she gets ready for school she eats her breakfast and out
the door she goes. she meets her friend Sean they have been friends for about three years so
they walk to school everyday together and every morning she cant wait till she sees him.. So Jane is exited she is a senior and her biggest goal is to get into her dream college. So she is a sweet girl and she likes school and has decent grades...
One of her hopes is to accomplish all of her goals one of her biggest goals is to attend her dream college and to make a big change in this world..
one of her deepest secrets is that she is completely in love with her friend Sean, no one knows she likes him but shes had a major crush on him since11th grade.
one of her greatest skills is that she can make any person happy most of the time she is delightful and wonderful
so everyday she goes to school she tries hard in everything she does and she doesn't like to express her feelings about how she feels or does things.
and other people think of her that she is a smart, sweet, and perky.
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Setting

Laguna Beach House Party

I hear ... the people screaming
I hear... the people singing with the band
I hear... the seagulls
I hear... the waves of the ocean
I hear... someone calling my name
I smell... the fire of the wood burning
I smell... the ocean the sweet smell of the sand
I smell... someone lighted up a cigarette
I smell... chocolate burning and smores
I smell... something that just dazes me off
I feel... a hard vibration
I feel... people around me just pushing me
I feel... the nice breeze
I feel... someone tenderly grabbing my hand
I feel... SO HAPPY being here
I see... a lot of people i love to be around
I see... someone especial i love
I see... a lot of glow in the dark sticks
I see... many things that fascinate me
I see... the beautiful view of the ocean
I taste... the sourness of the drink (punch)
I taste... the chocolate smores
I taste... many different flavors
I taste... not really sure what i taste or feel by this time..